Post by lilostitchthebest on Sept 19, 2012 11:29:54 GMT -5
Here's a deleted scene from my LiloXStitch fan story where my fan character Charlie almost dies. Info is in the DA description: stitchthebest36.deviantart.com/art/TBM-deleted-scene-Charlie-death-early-version-328083587
Lilo & Stitch: The Big Misunderstanding deleted scene.
(In Jumba's lab)
GRAND COUNCIL WOMAN:I have extracted the energy Deila took from the clone like you asked and am teleporting it.
JUMBA:Jumba is most grateful. Can only hope it works. (A special green energy source is seen arriving in the teleporter. It is contained in a large test tube. Jumba plugs it into the chamber with the Leroy clone inside. Nearby a small charge meter beeps)
HENRY:Wow.
JOSHUA:I was so scared that I'd lose Naomi.
(Jumba appears)
LILO: (To herself)Please...
JUMBA:I'v gotten the Leroy's energy back inside of him. He appears to be doing okay but could be awhile before knowing for sure. He is still unconisous.
LILO:Can I see him?
STITCH:Stitch go with da boojiboo.
JOSHUA,YUNA,NAOMI,KIDDA,HENRY: We want to come too!
JUMBA Ok ok!
(They all go in and see the Leroy clone inside a chamber. He appears to be sleeping. His breathing is weak but getting stronger. Lilo looks at him sadly. The clones eyes begin to open. His version is blurred at first. As it clears he sees Lilo)
CHARLIE: (weak)mmmhhh.
LILO:Jumba, he's awake.
JUMBA: Wow, that was quicker then Jumba expected. Experiment is a fighter.
YUNA:Will he be okay now?
JUMBA:Still must be keeping close eye on him. (Clone looks around at all the people in the room then closes eyes again. Awhile later he opens them. His vision is much clearer)
CHARLIE: (weakily)Lilo...(Pause. Lilo smiles)You...saved...me.
LILO:No, you saved us.
CHARLIE:I'm sorry for everything. I didn't want to hurt you. Delia and Hamsterviel made me.
(Stitch looks at the clone suspiously)
STITCH:Grrr.
CHARLIE: You have every right to be mad Stitch. I know I tore you away from Lilo...(Flashback to Hawaii. During the flashback there are voice overs of different characters filling in details. Stitch waits happily by the door while Nani works in the kitchen)
STITCH: (calls into Kitchen) Lilo be here soon?
(Nani looks at Stitch. She appears to be pregnant and has a decent sized baby bump)
NANI: Of course she will. She promised to come and help with my pregnancy remember? (phone rings) Hello? Lilo! When will you be here? Stitch is jumping off the walls with excitement.
LILO: (from inside a cab) I'll bet he is. I'll be there in about 10 moments and I'm bringing someone special with me.
NANI:Can't wait to see you both then.
STITCH: Both?
NANI: Bye.(hangs up)Lilo said she'll be here in 10 moments and that she's bringing someone from collage with her.
LILO: You ready to meet my Ohana? (she snuggles up to what she thinks is her human boyfriend)
CHARLIE:You bet sweetie. (His eyes start to glow yellow as a smirk comes onto his face) hehehe.
CHARLIE: (voice over)My job was plain and simple. Drive Lilo and Stitch apart forever.
STITCH: (voice over)Stitch never liked Lilo's boyfriend. Meega always thought he was evil and tried to keep Lilo away from him. Lilo get mad at Stitch for that a lot.
LILO: I'll sleep in my old room with Stitch.
STITCH:And Luke can sleep on couch.(to himself) and as far away from Stitch as possible.
LILO: Stitch! Be nice to Luke. You're always so jealous whenever I make a new friend!
STITCHvoice over) But there was no room for Lilo to sleep with boyfriend so we had nights to ourselves.
LILO :Ahh!
STITCH:Agaba?! Youga Okitaka???
LILO:I had a nightmare that you ran away.
STITCH: Stitch would never run away.
LILO:Can you stay up with me?
STITCH: Okitaka. (Stitch comes over and sits on her bed)
LILO:Stitch spent the whole night with me. I told him everything that had happened in collage and we eventually fell asleep in the same bed next to each other. It was so much like a dream I wasn't sure what parts of that night were real or not.
STITCH: (to Lilo.)Stitch barely spent any time with Lilo whole time she's been here. All Lilo seems to do is spend time with boyfriend like she doesn't care about Stitch anymore.
LILO:I promise I'll meet you at the beach. (later at a hospital)
DOCTOR:There's not enough amniotic fluid around the baby. You'll have to stay in the hospital Nani. We may have to get the baby out early.
LILO:We need to tell Stitch. I don't want him to miss the birth.
JUMBA:If only we had way to call him.
PLEAKLEY:I should have my space cell phone.(looks in bag) Oh no, it's not here!
LILO:Stitch will kill me if I break my promise. He'll think I forgot about him.
CHARLIE (voice over)When you were all worried about Nani I took Pleakley's space cell phone, used the GPS on the phone to find Stitch, and hypmotized him...
(Charlie finds Stitch walking to a nice spot on the beach. He transforms into Nosey)
CHARLIE AS NOSEY:Hey Stitch, where ya going?
STITCH:Lilo meeting meega at beach.
CHARLIE AS NOSEY:I just heard something interesting about Lilo.
STITCH:Gaba?
CHARLIE AS NOSEY (eyes start glowing yellow)If Lilo doesn't show up she's all washed up with you. Lilo doesn't need or want you anymore now that she has a boyfriend.
STITCH: (monotone)Lilo is all washed up with meega.
CHARLIE: (voice over)I saw Stitch leave about 30 moments after that. I considered the part of my job involving getting rid of Stitch to be complete.
LILO: STITCH!!! You said you'd never run away.
CHARLIE: (voice over)Then something happened that I never expected.
LILO:I'm pregnant.
CHARLIE:Wow.
(In a hospital)
LILO:You hold her.
CHARLIE:Hello little baby. Mind if I try feeding her?
NURSE:Not at all. Here is the bottle.
(Before feeding the baby Charlie puts 3 drops of a bluish liquid into the formula when no one is looking)
LILO: (looking sweetly at the tiny baby)Your name will be Kidda.
STITCH:Stitch sokka for breaking promise. Stitch not plan to leave Lilo forever but then Stitch and Jumba fell into black hole.
CHARLIE:That black hole was also created by Delia.(sighs now exhausted)
JUMBA:We should be letting clone rest.
Lilo & Stitch: The Big Misunderstanding deleted scene.
(In Jumba's lab)
GRAND COUNCIL WOMAN:I have extracted the energy Deila took from the clone like you asked and am teleporting it.
JUMBA:Jumba is most grateful. Can only hope it works. (A special green energy source is seen arriving in the teleporter. It is contained in a large test tube. Jumba plugs it into the chamber with the Leroy clone inside. Nearby a small charge meter beeps)
HENRY:Wow.
JOSHUA:I was so scared that I'd lose Naomi.
(Jumba appears)
LILO: (To herself)Please...
JUMBA:I'v gotten the Leroy's energy back inside of him. He appears to be doing okay but could be awhile before knowing for sure. He is still unconisous.
LILO:Can I see him?
STITCH:Stitch go with da boojiboo.
JOSHUA,YUNA,NAOMI,KIDDA,HENRY: We want to come too!
JUMBA Ok ok!
(They all go in and see the Leroy clone inside a chamber. He appears to be sleeping. His breathing is weak but getting stronger. Lilo looks at him sadly. The clones eyes begin to open. His version is blurred at first. As it clears he sees Lilo)
CHARLIE: (weak)mmmhhh.
LILO:Jumba, he's awake.
JUMBA: Wow, that was quicker then Jumba expected. Experiment is a fighter.
YUNA:Will he be okay now?
JUMBA:Still must be keeping close eye on him. (Clone looks around at all the people in the room then closes eyes again. Awhile later he opens them. His vision is much clearer)
CHARLIE: (weakily)Lilo...(Pause. Lilo smiles)You...saved...me.
LILO:No, you saved us.
CHARLIE:I'm sorry for everything. I didn't want to hurt you. Delia and Hamsterviel made me.
(Stitch looks at the clone suspiously)
STITCH:Grrr.
CHARLIE: You have every right to be mad Stitch. I know I tore you away from Lilo...(Flashback to Hawaii. During the flashback there are voice overs of different characters filling in details. Stitch waits happily by the door while Nani works in the kitchen)
STITCH: (calls into Kitchen) Lilo be here soon?
(Nani looks at Stitch. She appears to be pregnant and has a decent sized baby bump)
NANI: Of course she will. She promised to come and help with my pregnancy remember? (phone rings) Hello? Lilo! When will you be here? Stitch is jumping off the walls with excitement.
LILO: (from inside a cab) I'll bet he is. I'll be there in about 10 moments and I'm bringing someone special with me.
NANI:Can't wait to see you both then.
STITCH: Both?
NANI: Bye.(hangs up)Lilo said she'll be here in 10 moments and that she's bringing someone from collage with her.
LILO: You ready to meet my Ohana? (she snuggles up to what she thinks is her human boyfriend)
CHARLIE:You bet sweetie. (His eyes start to glow yellow as a smirk comes onto his face) hehehe.
CHARLIE: (voice over)My job was plain and simple. Drive Lilo and Stitch apart forever.
STITCH: (voice over)Stitch never liked Lilo's boyfriend. Meega always thought he was evil and tried to keep Lilo away from him. Lilo get mad at Stitch for that a lot.
LILO: I'll sleep in my old room with Stitch.
STITCH:And Luke can sleep on couch.(to himself) and as far away from Stitch as possible.
LILO: Stitch! Be nice to Luke. You're always so jealous whenever I make a new friend!
STITCHvoice over) But there was no room for Lilo to sleep with boyfriend so we had nights to ourselves.
LILO :Ahh!
STITCH:Agaba?! Youga Okitaka???
LILO:I had a nightmare that you ran away.
STITCH: Stitch would never run away.
LILO:Can you stay up with me?
STITCH: Okitaka. (Stitch comes over and sits on her bed)
LILO:Stitch spent the whole night with me. I told him everything that had happened in collage and we eventually fell asleep in the same bed next to each other. It was so much like a dream I wasn't sure what parts of that night were real or not.
STITCH: (to Lilo.)Stitch barely spent any time with Lilo whole time she's been here. All Lilo seems to do is spend time with boyfriend like she doesn't care about Stitch anymore.
LILO:I promise I'll meet you at the beach. (later at a hospital)
DOCTOR:There's not enough amniotic fluid around the baby. You'll have to stay in the hospital Nani. We may have to get the baby out early.
LILO:We need to tell Stitch. I don't want him to miss the birth.
JUMBA:If only we had way to call him.
PLEAKLEY:I should have my space cell phone.(looks in bag) Oh no, it's not here!
LILO:Stitch will kill me if I break my promise. He'll think I forgot about him.
CHARLIE (voice over)When you were all worried about Nani I took Pleakley's space cell phone, used the GPS on the phone to find Stitch, and hypmotized him...
(Charlie finds Stitch walking to a nice spot on the beach. He transforms into Nosey)
CHARLIE AS NOSEY:Hey Stitch, where ya going?
STITCH:Lilo meeting meega at beach.
CHARLIE AS NOSEY:I just heard something interesting about Lilo.
STITCH:Gaba?
CHARLIE AS NOSEY (eyes start glowing yellow)If Lilo doesn't show up she's all washed up with you. Lilo doesn't need or want you anymore now that she has a boyfriend.
STITCH: (monotone)Lilo is all washed up with meega.
CHARLIE: (voice over)I saw Stitch leave about 30 moments after that. I considered the part of my job involving getting rid of Stitch to be complete.
LILO: STITCH!!! You said you'd never run away.
CHARLIE: (voice over)Then something happened that I never expected.
LILO:I'm pregnant.
CHARLIE:Wow.
(In a hospital)
LILO:You hold her.
CHARLIE:Hello little baby. Mind if I try feeding her?
NURSE:Not at all. Here is the bottle.
(Before feeding the baby Charlie puts 3 drops of a bluish liquid into the formula when no one is looking)
LILO: (looking sweetly at the tiny baby)Your name will be Kidda.
STITCH:Stitch sokka for breaking promise. Stitch not plan to leave Lilo forever but then Stitch and Jumba fell into black hole.
CHARLIE:That black hole was also created by Delia.(sighs now exhausted)
JUMBA:We should be letting clone rest.